When you see her face in your book
Or when you repeatedly check facebook
When you fall in love with the sound of her voice
Or when she seems to be the ultimate choice
When you smile remembering the good old days
Or when you think, you are left with nothing to chase
When you have to gather courage to say the "word"
Or when talking to her, you forget the world
When you start sharing everything with her
Or when you forget to call your brother but not her
When an extrovert guy starts feeling shy
Or when slightest idea of her parting away can make you cry
When you take care of everything you speak
Or when you can’t find anything more sweet
When she talks to you in a shy-low voice
Or when she ignores her friends for you, by choice
Or when you turn into a poet, the most daunting task
Someone rightly said about poem,
it’s the feel that brings lineAnd probably today I set them fine
I wonder if these are the symptoms
I wonder if I am in love?
20 comments:
you know you are in love when "she" is the answer whenever someone asks you what you are thinking about!
Ofcourse you are in love my boy!
..LoVd It....:-)....W8N fOr MoRe......je t'aime...:)
awesome start nitish..nice one
just loved it......wish u all the best for your relationship....hoping to read more stuff lyk dis in future
one more bites d dust. ek aur pyar me surdas ban gaya..nitish beta love is temporaray insanity curable after marriage:P.
paapi likhi hai lekin poem..copy kar lunga zarrorat padi to kisi din.
@priti..... "te amo"
i dont want to read this one... the comments were enough... good going...
nic poen nitish .......bt who is she???
nice blog post...i mean the poem
and i must say...you are lucky but she is probably more lucky to have you as her boyfriend...i wish you all the best.... :)
Paapi !!! Amazing Dude !!
Is It's All PB Effect ??
Bas yahi Kehna Chahounga ....मैं शायर तो नहीं , मगर ए हसीन...जब से देखा मैंने तुझको मुझको शायरी आ गयी ..:)
bhai aaj to comment hi nahi sujh ra...
dil bhar aaya hai....
dil garden-garden ho gaya ! :)
nd..btw...switch over frm article to poetry...izz awesome !
really nice poem!!!
kya baat hai sir....mast!!...nd btw code words bhi nikaal liye hain kya...public me chat karne ke liye...haan??
are mast hai yaar ......... awesome ........ n u r in love ........... are bhai ye pyar mohobbat chhupane se nahi chhupti barkhurdaar ......... chahe jtna koshish karlo samne aa hi jaati hai ..........
mast hai ...
pyar bhari kavita. <3
Sir, Poet ban gayee ab to :)
nice work sir
you became a poet....
Very nice poem..dude
isko mai gazal ke du to teri kalpana ki tauheen hai....
teri is sada ki to sari mehfil shaukeen hai....
har lafz bayan karta hai muhabbat ke tarane ko...
tere dil se nikli aawaz, ye teri naazneen hai......
keep it up yar......bas chand shabd hi keh skta hu aapke liye......mere dil ki bas chhoti si gustakhi hai aapki shaan mai...
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